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Feb 24, 2010
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God, it's you (I thank you for asking PART TWO)
Remember a while back
When I came to your flat
And was a bag of nerves that night
Then you invited me in
I helped with your stockings
And then you dimmed the lights
Oh I've never felt so fine
You sent a tingling down my spine
It must be you, you, YOU!
What a night we had
Never felt passion so bad
All my words were lost
When you let your bath towel drop
The card from your bouquet
You still keep on display
To remind you of that night
And now I'm back for more
Again knock on your door
Holding thoughts that excite!
I never thought this possible
But you look more beautiful
God it's you, you, YOU!
You love my aftershave
It's the same one from that day
Maybe I'm still a little shy
But I know you'll put that right.
When I came to your flat
And was a bag of nerves that night
Then you invited me in
I helped with your stockings
And then you dimmed the lights
Oh I've never felt so fine
You sent a tingling down my spine
It must be you, you, YOU!
What a night we had
Never felt passion so bad
All my words were lost
When you let your bath towel drop
The card from your bouquet
You still keep on display
To remind you of that night
And now I'm back for more
Again knock on your door
Holding thoughts that excite!
I never thought this possible
But you look more beautiful
God it's you, you, YOU!
You love my aftershave
It's the same one from that day
Maybe I'm still a little shy
But I know you'll put that right.
— Millage, Feb 24, 2010
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talkingcat
16 years 3 months ago
like to hear that fine
Millage
16 years 3 months ago
Ha ha ha
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
So glad to see you back dear friend
Millage
16 years 3 months ago
thank you beautiful