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God, it's you (I thank you for asking PART TWO)

Remember a while back
When I came to your flat
And was a bag of nerves that night
Then you invited me in
I helped with your stockings
And then you dimmed the lights

Oh I've never felt so fine
You sent a tingling down my spine
It must be you, you, YOU!

What a night we had
Never felt passion so bad
All my words were lost
When you let your bath towel drop

The card from your bouquet
You still keep on display
To remind you of that night
And now I'm back for more
Again knock on your door
Holding thoughts that excite!

I never thought this possible
But you look more beautiful
God it's you, you, YOU!

You love my aftershave
It's the same one from that day
Maybe I'm still a little shy
But I know you'll put that right.
— Millage, Feb 24, 2010

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talkingcat

16 years 3 months ago

like to hear that fine

like to hear that fine thrumming of heart, cock and movement thru the poem, plain speak for a colourful event, thanks!
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Millage

16 years 3 months ago

Ha ha ha

Happy to oblige! Thank you for reading Much love Millage x
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Millage

16 years 3 months ago

thank you beautiful

for your kind comments. It seems there is a fine line between romantic writing and all out shagging1 Ha ha ha!!! Much love Millage x