The Mystery of The Mona Lisa and the Ripping of Space and Time

Thank you Mona :) glad you enjoyed the poem, inspired after discovering a very talented artist and one of his pictures specifically. Much love Beki xx

Hee hee Anna, might have known you'd get this one :). Have reposted a link to the picture, you should be able to view it now, Ashley's work is amazing and resonates with me on a deep level :) Think you might like it ;) Hoping you're well Anna, much love Beki xxx

Thanks raskin :) I'm glad you like this one, I don't often say it about my own work but I quite liked this one too lol happy you read some joy here :) much love Beki xxx

Thanks dreampoet :) glad you enjoyed something here, much love Beki xxx

Thanks for the crit :) I totally get what you're saying about the title, it's partly named after the title of the picture that inspired it, so I should like to keep the bracketed part, to acknowledge that, but am open to ideas on a more fitting title :) will give it some thought and any suggestions gratefully recieved :) Happy you liked the poem though. Thanks and much love Beki xxx

Thanks Wafi :) always happy when you enjoy one of mine, you make me smile :) Thanks, much love Beki xxx

Nina, that's some comment, thank you :) I had a lovely Valentines, although it ended with a nasty bug :( much better now though and everyday is still like Valentine's lol ;) So happy you enjoyed the poem Nina, hoping you're well and happy dear poetess? Much love Beki xxx

Thank You Jess, I'm humbled by your comment but Nicole was right about the title, I think you found the poem in the stream after editing, it was previously entitled, 'She Smiles (the mystery of the Mona Lisa)' which I'm sure you'll agree was a bit lame :)) I agree it is one of my better poems, it was one of those that pretty much wrote itself lol, I love those :) and it owes it's existence to Ashley's picture. Much love to you Jess xx

No need for apologies babe and utterly fab to see you too :) So happy you enjoyed the poem, it is one I, unusually, feel quite happy with :) as I said to jess it pretty much wrote itself :) HUGE hugs and loadsa love to you Jayne xxx

High praise indeed sir! :) Thank you Ian, apologies for not responding sooner, I have so little time at the moment to play here, I miss it. Hope you're well, thanks for reading. Much love Beki xxx

Thank you Moonman :) It's my pleasure to share, just wish I could do it more often. Miss reading too. So happy you enjoyed this one, it's a poem, as I've said, I was unusually pleased with :) HUGE love to you Richard xxx