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Sometime Dreams

 Sometime Dreams


      I sometimes dream of flowers
            of meadows filled with scent

      Sometimes I dream of soft warm sand
            places going...or places went

      At times my dreams are black and white..
            sometimes they are blood red

      Sometimes I see the future..
            or the past and thoughts I dread

      At times I dream of poetry...
            of words that dance and rhyme

      And there have been those many dreams..
            I dream of a love I'll find..

      Quite often I dream of Vampyres..
            ok... maybe ....just one

      But never , ever ..scary dreams
            no matter what, they're seldom fun

      I doubt I'll stop my dreaming...
            it is just what I do.....

      I think it's pretty safe to say...
            I stop dreaming..when life is through.

 

 Sue

— jetz, Feb 05, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I don’t understand why you

I don't understand why you haven't been snapped up as an established poet...perhaps you have...if not, you should be? Rosina xena465
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 3 months ago

Sometime Dreams

Jetz Welcome to the Neo family. This is so serene honey dew smooth. I love the rythem and the rhyme soft fluidity. awesome Electric Blue
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Nice Jetz

Another nice one here and how do you get your font so slanted like that? It's appearance is very nice and the poem is great. I just noticed is Vampite spelled two different ways here? Anyhow a nice one on dreams. love,magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.