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Feb 03, 2010
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Train
Train whistle blowingEcho’s down the trackSee the glowing embersFalling on the track Noise of the rocking railFeel the wheels vibrateOn the track singingIts own melodyGoing clickity clack Sounds are getting strongerThe closer it getsThe power the energyExplode spiting out fireAll along the track Train still picking up the paceFaster faster round the bendsOnward through the lonely nightEndless tracks ahead Onward into the dark dark nightA never ending trackTrain whistle blowingSinging clickity clack Echo’s haunt the silenceOf the dark and lonely nightA gently rocking motionThe rhythm soothesMy beating heart
— Electric Blue, Feb 03, 2010
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Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Train
Idlemindwondering
16 years 4 months ago
I see where you are heading
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Train
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
Love the revving of the
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Train