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Tree of Souls

 This special bond shared by us all, 

telepathically we are the roots joined,

so in tune - in unison, we the

reborn seeds of life. The light falls onto that single dew drop,that jewel as it gently slides down theinside or outside the petalsof a flower. Or as leaves on the tree.Falling tears in slow motion,glistening bright full ofrainbow wishes Tear drops of mother nature,freely fall from our hearts.feeding the seeds   waiting to grow
 The melody of nature’s orchestraso soothing, refreshed are we
The souls of the tree


always to be





Electric blue
— Electric Blue, Jan 22, 2010

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

EB Nature my comfort be in all seasons It is always the place I go when feeling bright or feeling low it is me Electric Blue
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

"The light falls onto that single dew drop,"

"The light falls onto that single dew drop, that jewel as it gently slides down the inside or outside the petals of a flower.   Or as leaves on the tree. Falling tears in slow motion, glistening bright full of rainbow wishes" These lines are my favourite as I too feel as if I am falling and glistening in the so beautiful lights of rainbow colours, a mysterious mesmerisation in words, the drugs of poetry's magic charms, you are indeed a sorceress of our minds. And that part is the section I like most, the other parts I for me are not as interestingly expressed, not sure quite why but I will hang on to this part and yet again ride its thought, it is such a beautiful thought. Ann of Norway with love to you dear Maggie( I like your picture)
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 3 months ago

Tree of Souls

Ann Sorceress of minds? if only. I saw this vision and was mesmerised by the mystery as the dew drop hung by invisible threads for some time. I still see it now. The pearlessence The beauty beyond measure. So precious each glistening gem As with the leaves on the tree, as the dew drop falls in slow motion onto the next leaf creating a beautiful melody of its own. Until it falls to the soft brown earth below now refreashed. Slip sliding down down down to become part of the stream the river the ocean and fall as rain again. The circle of life continues As for the picture. I was not sure as to show the full picture or just my face? Still thinking about it. Showing the real me. Electric Blue
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

The real you comes beaming

The real you comes beaming out to us like the sunshine here dear Maggie, you look wonderful a lovely lovely person full of the joy of nature and the experiences nature gives us, we can see that, so you can make the picture big or small, we know beyond the picture into the you that sees and that is your strength and beauty too. Love to you today from Ann
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

Ann As you can see in my picture i am surrounded by trees with the sunlight shinning making my heart light making me smile happy thoughts. Sun shine bright making me glow thinking of my hearts delight Always Electric blue
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

A true lover of nature

I can tell by this beautiful poem and your comments to Anne that you truely are in tune with nature. I liked your comment to orphano, (which is why I wanted to check out your site) who always gives me great comments on my poetry. Your profile is very impressive. I haven't done much with my life but I do have deep thoughts on life and love to write them in poetry form, which in a way feels like I've experience these themes myself. sincerely xena
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

Xena Thank your for you comments I hope you can share my journeys and bring some light in your life. Always Electric Blue
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

The melody of nature’s

The melody of nature's orchestra ... Oh I love that line. We are offered so many beautiful gifts within nature and so seldom do we just stop to view it and appreciate its delicacy. The small white fungus mid and pine forest that pops out, fragile, looking like an albino flower - dainty, delicate - nearly glowing. Lovely lovely thoughts here. ~Pamela
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

Pamela If you go to my profile you will see I write a lot about nature. A place I feel at home, my safe place. A place just to be. Whether it is the forest or by a lake. The ocean or the open moors. Just to be open to receive the energy of the elements. I hope I can take you on a beautiful journey with me Thank you for looking in on my poetry Electric Blue
xena465

xena465

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

Hello Maggie I've just recently noticed that I can rate a poem. This one a definite 5 star. I hope you have enjoyed your few days away. Hope to hear from you soon. xena
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Wonderful

The picture I see the nature, the tree.. Beautiful write of yours here and I enjoyed it as I also enjoy mothers nature. Kudos to you Electric blue Mona
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Tree of Souls

Mona I love nature but I feel we are all connected like the roots of the tree in word and thoughts this invisible chord that ties binds us in heart mind and soul I am glad you were able to share my journey Electric Blue
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Tree of Souls

Mona I am glad you were able to share my journey. I am at home in mother nature Electric blue
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Dalton

16 years 1 month ago

every tree has a soul as pure

every tree possesses a soul as pure and significant as that of a human. you might say we are twins in nature. your title here was perfect, i wish i'd thought of it for one of mine. john
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Tree of souls

John lovely to hear from you. If you read the comments I was inspired by the film AVATAR where the NA'VI gather at the base of the Tree of Souls join outstretched arms and sway and chant and look and become the roots of the tree. I saw how it was us as poets joining together with our words that joins us together and spread like tendrils. The scene touched deep down inside my soul and the light was spiritual. When i walk i look at the leaves or petals and see the veins of life pulsating as is us full of life. The visuals in this movie are amazing and i have seen it about 15 times in 3D It reallys has to be seen on the big screen for the best effect. I walk my mountain green and go down by the river's edge sit a while and breath in all around me and listen to their conversation whispered on the wind but i am able to understand the music and write their messages down. John You really got me going on this. I could go on and on. Nature is the place i go with my sad heart with recent events with mama passing a few weeks ago she lived on the mountain all of her life and we would sit on the porch when the sun goes down and watch the stars come up one by one. Memories stored to recall Always my friend Maggie xxx
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Oh my electric blue

I tell you how I really missed you Your quite the friend, my electric blue The pictures you paint inside my head Burning love, many colors of red Natures walk along rippled streams I hear your guitar, I hear you sing. You know I love your style of writing and just everything about you is great girl. I missed you much and think of you often and hope soon you will be in the states so we can congregate. LOL ciao bella Magics02 xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 1 month ago

Tree of souls

Mona I did not know I had a style? I just do I just stream. I see what I write it is like a video replay for me I just write the words but also create the ambiance with sights sounds and smells all the elements to transport you there. I paint pictures with words but long to also put them on canvas when i get the time I am glad you see it others do not I fear. Time well spent? Time could be shared with the right one, times slips by so quickly and is running out. speak soon Electric Blue trying to be Electric again.