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Dec 31, 2009
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NEW YEARS PROMISE
Hopes for another year
destiny unhinged given
wings new years resolutions
success or dismay where
desire is laden often frayed
at the outset.
An anniversary of digested
promise daintily displayed
when do we have true custody
of it within the compassion of
our display.
They who curb enthusiasm
may have hidden passion deposited.
those the words of the enthusiastic
big mouth fantastic when obstacles
become hurdles jumped.
A new years promise a single persona
on display take from it what you may.
destiny unhinged given
wings new years resolutions
success or dismay where
desire is laden often frayed
at the outset.
An anniversary of digested
promise daintily displayed
when do we have true custody
of it within the compassion of
our display.
They who curb enthusiasm
may have hidden passion deposited.
those the words of the enthusiastic
big mouth fantastic when obstacles
become hurdles jumped.
A new years promise a single persona
on display take from it what you may.
— ziggy, Dec 31, 2009
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mrillogical
16 years 5 months ago
i think you dont have a
ziggy
16 years 5 months ago
hi my friend
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Cool
ziggy
16 years 5 months ago
hi lyz
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
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