Spoken with out Words has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

Spoken with out Words

Has been Selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/spoken-with-out-words/

Inspired by Seabac a Neo.poet's poem

“When Touch out Weighs Words”

Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Dec 26, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Sinbad wonderful write !!

I loved this and i am sure that Seabhac will too ... second line speak ? not[speek] kind regards love Jayne x x

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you for pointing that out to me I read this sevral times

But did not catch that darn it all I will fix straight away I hope she will like it Thanks Jayne Donnie/Sinbad

Cloudthings

16 years 4 months ago

worthy of spotlight or whatever attentions you most aspire to

Hey rushed here with no time to dwell long but this GOT me... there are many extraordinary lines here & I am really impressed, may I suggest a grammatical overhaul, it could just use a polish in terms of minor elements, otherwise exceptional... Wow, stunning stuff really... As a man I fear the breaking of my Glass lips and porcelain heart brilliant In terms of my suggestion I mean things like?.... So I speak to you with hands bounded (maybe bound is more grammatically correct?) and made of steel Bound in leather so you won’t feel The coldness of their stealing touch Of your healing and of your passions It wouldn't take much to make this a solidly impressive & excellent work most worthy of spotlight or whatever attentions you most aspire to. I am giving you my vote in anticipation since I wont be around for a while... best of luck & I look forward to reading more from you. Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you Anni~ I am never realy done or it would seem

I have been playing A face book game Call Mafia Wars and running back and forth for with my come and go connection of wi-fi. I got to get as much as I can done when I can. I was trying to catch up with my Mafia buddies and my farm town buddies and farkle buddies. Its hard but I do stay up all day and night and drink coffee to stem of sleep plus I am using and older laptop and it can't handle my demands of it But I am making it work as long as it will Thanks for your comments and advise Donnie/Sinbad I did some work on this piece and when I am fresh I take a look at all of them I am working on but it is arare treat to have a connection at home.