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Rapid Eye Movement

Sweet shut eye drifts
across the pitfalls of
elaboration,float away
on a whispering breeze
the body of change subsides

a seamless pattern of
jumbled images running
through each other bespoke
in lavish detail.

any unrequested swirl of
pent up emotion not gazed
on by the conscious eye

An evaporated cloak of
awareness within the cranium
of invention , a thought provoking
dimension
— ziggy, Dec 06, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello Ziggy

My favorite lines are: An evaporated cloak of awareness within the cranium of invention , a thought provoking dimension it is indeed a very thought provoking dimension. I very much liked this poem. I have been ill as of late, and will now try to get some sleep to quell this monster headache and sore throat. I will get caught up on your poems tomorrow. your friend Cat
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

r,e,m

hi there cat , yip i`m delighted to get a comment as this has being here a few days folk busy with xmas , i hope you are feeling better soon and i hope you have the xmas you are looking farward to thanks again cat your my rock ,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Oh Zigs

I think I will only one word comment on your poems of late. Awesome, lol. You are rocking mate. Love Lyz. XX
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hi there

hello my friend ah i always luv to see your comments luv to you and yours for 2010 , is just tuned new year here , xx endastory , lol ............