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Dec 06, 2009
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Rapid Eye Movement
Sweet shut eye drifts
across the pitfalls of
elaboration,float away
on a whispering breeze
the body of change subsides
a seamless pattern of
jumbled images running
through each other bespoke
in lavish detail.
any unrequested swirl of
pent up emotion not gazed
on by the conscious eye
An evaporated cloak of
awareness within the cranium
of invention , a thought provoking
dimension
across the pitfalls of
elaboration,float away
on a whispering breeze
the body of change subsides
a seamless pattern of
jumbled images running
through each other bespoke
in lavish detail.
any unrequested swirl of
pent up emotion not gazed
on by the conscious eye
An evaporated cloak of
awareness within the cranium
of invention , a thought provoking
dimension
— ziggy, Dec 06, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
hello Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
r,e,m
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Oh Zigs
ziggy
16 years 5 months ago
hi there