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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Dec 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beef and Cream has been selected for publication@ Triond.com

Beef and Cream

Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/beef-and-cream/

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Sinbad the Sailor Man


— Sinbadthesailorman, Dec 05, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Critiques

Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Beef and Cream...

I liked the story, but you just didn't make the presentation interesting enough. If you had made it a poem, rhyming would have been the way to go. I would like to see you try this again. ~ Geezer ~ P.S. Happy New Year!
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

15 years 11 months ago

Happy New year Geezer

I tried to make it a poem it is close yes no? Sinbad/ Donnie Here you Go Geezer I tightened it up for ya what do ya think? Donnie/Sinbad
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Making it a poem...

I tried to access it, but it wouldn't let me. I would be very interested to see what you did to change it. Afterall, it is getting published isn't it? Do you want to send it to me? ~ Gee
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

15 years 11 months ago

The link is working now. I might have been working on it this

Link. This one did give me a lot of trouble. If I every make enough money I'll get a better PC with the right soft ware. I was up all night removing and re-typing old poems and their sites on which they were already being viewed. Plus I still need to update my web site again. And I am out of Twinkies I need to do laundry and dishes and shopping, but I am having to much fun right this minute. I am getting ready to sing up with another pay per click site, but I still want to check it out a little more. they accept material that is already post else where on the web as long as it is your original work. Donnie/Sinbad the Sailor Man I am Happy with My search results to was and have been listed second if you search my pen with no spaces. TTFN I'll be back!