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Nov 20, 2009
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Poetic Psychology 101
I travel roads less wandered
to lands not touched by time
where dreams are never squandered
and verses always rhyme
Singing songs of walking
my words propel my feet
down streets where Elves go stalking
and sudden strangers meet
Past the mists of morning
beyond the realm of real
I stumble without warning
on what my thoughts reveal
A universe of make-believe
where mystic creatures dance
to music that the heart conceives
by giving in to chance
Where innocence can never die
and death can never live
'tis there my soul may justify
those deeds I can't forgive
C. Lon R. Bruso
to lands not touched by time
where dreams are never squandered
and verses always rhyme
Singing songs of walking
my words propel my feet
down streets where Elves go stalking
and sudden strangers meet
Past the mists of morning
beyond the realm of real
I stumble without warning
on what my thoughts reveal
A universe of make-believe
where mystic creatures dance
to music that the heart conceives
by giving in to chance
Where innocence can never die
and death can never live
'tis there my soul may justify
those deeds I can't forgive
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Nov 20, 2009
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ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hi lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, Ziggy!
poewriter58
16 years 6 months ago
Bear
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Many thanks, Love!
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Lonnie, you are the master
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, dear Lady!
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you so much, Jayne!
Roscoe Lane
16 years 6 months ago
Brilliant
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you much, Sir!
poewriter58
16 years 6 months ago
Congrats
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Please, not war!
Baz
16 years 6 months ago
Hi Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, Sir!
G.D.K
16 years 6 months ago
Enjoyed the whole number but
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
many Thanks!
Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
Hi Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks, Cat!
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
I danced to the rhythm through the mists of poetry,
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks so much, Ann!
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
This rhyming verse starts
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, Barry!
aeron
16 years 6 months ago
Wow Lonnie,
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, Aeron!
Tam the Chanter
16 years 6 months ago
rhythms
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks much, Ian!
W.C.Wampler
16 years 6 months ago
poetic psycology poem
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Many Thanks, W.C.!
Esker
16 years ago
deep and intrspective and hope