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Secretly Seduced was She and then He has been selected for publication @ wikinut.com

Secretly Seduced was She and then He
Has been selected for publication @ wikinut.com

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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 19, 2009

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Sinbad

Like the connotation of the name and the title and subject of the poem ...very apt. I read this on its first posting and enjoyed it but had so little time to write a comment. Tonight also I have not the time to give this great write the justice it deserves but I cannot let it pass without a comment. I like the twist in the theme and where it leads, the ending for me falls a little flat, yes the sequel as in the New Testament but it doesn't leave you guessing... I'll try and get back and give it more time. Best wishes Seabhac
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you very much Seabhac But the sequal I was trying to imply

Was not the New Testament but the never ending story of eternal life in Heaven I Have often said things crawl up inside me and they just won't leave me be until I write them down I scare myself some times with writings I don't know why but I don't seem to get to pick and choose what I like to write about when these write enter into my mind the demand to be written if not posted I may have to see a shrink if I did not release them Donnie/Sinbad Thanks for the read and the comments
Beauregard

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

I've always wondered

about that nakedness/nudity thing. Would we still be naked if woman never sinned (according to the Christian bible's creation story)? Would nakedness/nudity still be perceived with such negativity/disgust? Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

15 years 11 months ago

Kelsey the Naked truth is what I think the sin was in the garden

To me the woman sin no more then the man for they were one flesh. Eve was taken from and formed from The New creation Man I use to tease my ex-wife and say it was because of Eve But I knew and know Better Satan as well as Christ were in the Garden The tree of Life refers to the Saviour Jesus The tree of Good and Evil to The fallen Lucifer who was as bright as the morning star but was not The Morning Star But indeed an impostor. Lucifer who was Charged to protect the innocents of Gods creations in this third of "IT" (Gods Creation) 2 other thirds exist which did not fall from Gods Grace After deceiving Eve The Help Mate of Man. God could no longer Look upon Man with out seeing The Fallen Cherubim Lucifer as redeemable. There For God renamed him Satan Because he found no more good in him. Satan THE FATHER of ALL Lies a Thief and a Murder = Satan= Lucifer Fallen God Clothed Mankind Adam and Eve and all the Deceived as a reminder to Satan of his second fall. Is why Religious Zealots see Nudity as Evil or as appeasement to Satan The first Fall of Satan before This Dispensation of Time Is believed By some to be the Parable that Christ taught referring to the Vineyard a well known parable also refer to as the Katabul by some. These are How I see the story- lines of the Bible First The Fall, Second The Deception, and Finally the Redemption. But most religious sects and people think I am Nutz, But I think most of them are too so thats a draw LOL. No I think Nudity is beautiful as God created it. Clothes do no justice to the tapestry of The Father But God never repents for/ from His Gifts. This third of Heaven was an Honor Or a Gift bestowed upon Lucifer now Satan because he earned it {[The Prince of This World]Christ refers to in scripture} and because of the Second Fall, "Time" was also Bestowed upon Satan's Third of God's Creation, a gift for God's children, Grapes? A reality Check or a sentencing of Lucifer as Satan who knowing Good and Evil choose Evil, for the new Creation "Man" or The Adam who God Placed before the angels and Cherubims making Void Satan's Hold of His Third of Creation and offering a final call to repentance. Which Satan to pride full let pass because of the temptations of God the Son Realized by the Day Christ was crucified because of his Temptations of him before it Lucifer became Satan forever more. When Christ Spoke these words to him GET THEE BEHIND ME. A little more then you may have asked for but a better insight to what i believe and where I am coming from with some of my writings. Sorry for the explanations but I thought they may help you some in understanding My writes a bit, Donnie/Sinbad the Sailor Man
Beauregard

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

Don't apologize

I enjoy the sharing of ideas and thank you for elaborating on your perspective. My brother chides (I hope jokingly) that " 'Everything' (sin/corruption/etc) is woman's fault because of Eve." Did ever stop to think "Eve came from Adam"? Nope. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

15 years 11 months ago

Most Believe This is The Case it is Woman's Fault I do Not!

Of all those I have Conversed with, Religious folks, they total don't know of, or connect Satan to Lucifer and Lucifer to the Prince of This world. They Blame THE Adam's Wife who was No more then Himself expanded by God. A Growth spurt of sorts for his spirit, for we are neither given or taken in marriage in heaven. They forget we are made in Gods Image and all that entails. They forget Man was given authority over all his enemies / rivals. They forget God is the beginning and the ending. They don't put events into any order, least of all the correct order. I've never seen one Teacher, preacher, priest ect. ect. Tell the story of The Complete book why? Don't know can't even guess why they don't. It sold me and I don't or didn't believe in shit. It took forty some years, but I am sold. I believe The Book for many reasons. The chief of them (the reasons) Is we live in a world of lies. We see only what we want and what those "in the know" want us to see. Sheep God calls us for a very good reason many wolfs in sheep clothing, But not so many sheep in wolves clothing. Even still very few men standing. I love the Book it is by far the best Book I've very read not that I've read many repeatedly. It contains Vast Amounts of information. Still contained within in it even in it's present day state, reduced to a Legal Document. Is no wonder we won't read it and study it, it is out of order, mixed up, and full of misdirections. I believe to say it is not so, would be a lie. It is a puzzle that needs decoding and can only be decoded by belief and rereading, another clever draw for me. But as of late I have not even cracked the Book open. Because much of it is starting to be spouted on the air waves TV and radio and other types of media as well as the Lies and misdirections or perceptions. Which I myself may be guilty of also. I don't believe I am so, but I have to consider it may be so. Donnie/ Sinbad