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IN MEMORY OF ERIN WEST 11--4-09

                             IN MEMORY OF ERIN WEST

 

I write this prayer just for you,

This day my heart is saddened too.

My heart goes out to you today,

In my own spiritual loving way.

I'm sorry for your loss so deep,

For your beautiful daughter whose gone to sleep.

God has lovingly taken her into his hands,

To His place forever, his promised land.

 

His love surrounds her loving soul,

She's with him now, forever, you know.

The beautiful Erin, with a beautiful smile,

The loving daughter you had for a while.

My heart goes out to you Sqt. Dials,

For all your hurt and all your sorrow.

I want you to know that I loved her too,

For no one shall fill her beautiful shoes.

 

A smart loving young woman,

With a heart of pure gold

For she was only 24 years old.

I wish I could take away all your pain,

Your sorrow, your tears, with God's help you sustain.

Please know in your heart,

The sadness I feel.

For your lovely young daughter,

It doesn't seem real.

She's gone with Our Lord,

You shall see her again.

Remember this, I love you my friend.

 

— magics02, Nov 12, 2009

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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 6 months ago

A poets tears

Magic. I find this hard to read as I only know this person you speak of from the words you placed to the screen. It is well placed that she is with God now and I pray that they will be happy agian to see eachother another day. With God she will be happy agian and well I offer all I can as a man to say. She was loved when her life was taken away. Steven A. Kacer
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

So nicely said and i thank you so much. She was a beautiful person
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

In Memory of Erin WEST

Mona In the arms of the angels is she. As is my bob he past 04/07/09 Maybe you can take a look at Ocean's Farewell Always Electric Blue