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IN MEMORY OF ERIN WEST 11--4-09
IN MEMORY OF ERIN WEST
I write this prayer just for you,
This day my heart is saddened too.
My heart goes out to you today,
In my own spiritual loving way.
I'm sorry for your loss so deep,
For your beautiful daughter whose gone to sleep.
God has lovingly taken her into his hands,
To His place forever, his promised land.
His love surrounds her loving soul,
She's with him now, forever, you know.
The beautiful Erin, with a beautiful smile,
The loving daughter you had for a while.
My heart goes out to you Sqt. Dials,
For all your hurt and all your sorrow.
I want you to know that I loved her too,
For no one shall fill her beautiful shoes.
A smart loving young woman,
With a heart of pure gold
For she was only 24 years old.
I wish I could take away all your pain,
Your sorrow, your tears, with God's help you sustain.
Please know in your heart,
The sadness I feel.
For your lovely young daughter,
It doesn't seem real.
She's gone with Our Lord,
You shall see her again.
Remember this, I love you my friend.
Critiques
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years 6 months ago
A poets tears
magics02
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
In Memory of Erin WEST