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emogothgirl
emogothgirl
Oct 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

cutting pain

sink with death and misery
cut the pain and bleed it free

life`s too hard to survive
why should I try to stay alive

poison love and torn apart
bleeding pain, run down my heart

ripping open age old wounds
always broken, more now i move

killing faster now let die 
steel myself, and as i try

poison love and torn apart
blood and fear drip down my heart



ps
plz dont email me i`ll get in trouble


— emogothgirl, Oct 05, 2009

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Region, Country: somewhere in the middle of the mountains, USA

Favorite Poets: life.

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The Silent Saint

16 years 8 months ago

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I can relate and I really liked the poem. I've actually written similar poems. Writing is a good way of releasing feelings and emotional baggage, try to write more often instead of harming yourself.
emogothgirl

emogothgirl

16 years 8 months ago

thanks

thanks for your concern but i`m not the one actually cutting myself here. i wrote this poem for my friend who has been going through tough times. she tells me everything, and i just put this into different words. thanks again, maggie
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 8 months ago

wow Maggie!

You're a lot more perceptive than you give yourself credit for. This poem is ":right on the money" in terms of capturing the pain, the tension and cutting giving release from both! Glad you're not the victim of it though! lol Keep up the good writing! Bonita j
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

This is very good, and I think you have captured the pain. Glad to know you wrote it for others and you are not the victim of self-abuse, as I was. Always, Cat
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XevanescenceangelX

16 years 7 months ago

O.O

pretty good, i liked it a lot. i know exactly what you're talking about, and for those that don't, this certainly helped. glad you're not the on the recieving end of the pain in your poem.
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luvyewkillyew

16 years 6 months ago

wow

I saw you on someone elses profile decided to take a look i really liked your poem i can relate to it very well i feel like you really feel what your writing i think we have that in common.
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XevanescenceangelX

16 years 6 months ago

thanks

thanks for the compliment. i write a lot more than just that, but they are all up on a different site. some of my poetry is about me, but some of it isnt. i read a lot, so i get a lot of my emotion from books. this one does relate to me, though (Save Me).