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Cri de Ralliement (A Battle Cry)
As all light went out
I stood shaded in Grey,
hopes wings were clipped
and this heart wont obey
Suspended in life
with the drowning of fear,
putting fire in my bones
brings a power to bear
Gluing the wings
on letters and words,
I'm setting them free
to find new worlds
Sowing the plains
with peace and love,
I'm laying them out
for angels above
If reaching for stars
my legs give way,
I'll open my mind
and fly anyway
Spitting in the face
of what they say,
having nowhere to go
I wont go away
Being greedy in
the grasping of time,
it slipped through my fingers
to touch the divine
Illuminated love
reached out for me,
then gifted with eyes
I had futures to see
All Life goes on
lights are snuffed out,
death hides in shadows
of that I've no doubt
Granules of love
I've secretly hid,
dwelling in mind
with forever I'll live
A formidable foe
I have become,
with a fight to the death
My kingdom will come
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Cat
CyberSpace
16 years 8 months ago
Love you Baby
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
love you more
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Battle Cry...
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Gee
Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Ahhhhhh Matty my Darlin'
thewholesoul
16 years 8 months ago
wow that was an excellent
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Conor
Ink Dragon
16 years 8 months ago
Jayne,
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Nina
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Jayne:
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 8 months ago
You do have the gift
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
My Darling Fleur
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Love u 2
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Ello Darlin'(hugz)
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Kal
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
Oh oh oh! what does one say
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Ann
Hooded Stranger
16 years 8 months ago
Seren
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear HS
Hooded Stranger
16 years 8 months ago
Niggled no more
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear HS
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
These type poems are grey,
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Anna
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Superbe! Très évocateur!
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear PP