Janice Pearce

Aug 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hypnotized

Spun from wintry patterns,
of hypnotic silver swirls
rural roads slowly drift;
land mines in disguise.

Contest code: 083109
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Subject: Winter

— Janice Pearce, Aug 27, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

hugo la rosa

16 years 9 months ago

Janice

Silver swirls that get you even colder, and really hypnotizing stiff your face, hands and feet as you cross streets or turn the next corner. I feel the swift wind amidst the buildings, I guess coming from the hills. Excellent poem, short and beautiful. Best Regards, Hugo

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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Hugo, Thanks for visiting my winter poem. Your comment is so appreciated~ _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Diatom Shells

16 years 9 months ago

what..

what a translation my dear. winter is a mysterious being. -diatom shells

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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Appreciate your comment, Thanks for stopping by! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

dear Janice

Winter is very hypnotic. Your verse put a picture in my mind. I enjoyed this winter of silver swirls, beautiful view but danger hidden by it's beauty. Title etc. to me all great.

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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lyz, Glad that this brought your mind into the winter's season.I am shivering just thinking about it,but there is so much beauty too. Your feedback is always appreciated! ___________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Janice

Beautiful and enchanting. Always, Cat

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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Thanks for your comment, always a pleasure Cat! ___________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

HI THERE

enda, patrick collins. fav lines . spun from wintery paterns of hypnotic silver swirls, what a great line i could almost feel the chill

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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Ziggy, Thanks for the comment, glad it took you there!BRRRRR ____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Wafi

16 years 9 months ago

Just Wonderful, Janice!

Just wonderful,Janice!! Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

Janice Pearce

16 years 9 months ago

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Wafi, Hello there, thanks for the read and your comment. I always appreciate your thoughts~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

W.C.Wampler

16 years 8 months ago

Hypnotized...contest parameters poem

J.P., Contest parameters can be hard to work with. You did a fine job on this piece. The hypnotic beauty hiding the land mines. I've seen that, wcw

Janice Pearce

16 years 8 months ago

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W.C. Thanks for your support. I always appreciate your feedback and thoughts about my written words! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous