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greeneyes
greeneyes
Aug 18, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Nightfall


Stars light up the sky
Wolves howl to man on the moon
He is their master

— greeneyes, Aug 18, 2009

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 10 months ago

Nice haiku

Did you mean man 'in' the moon? As in like the face formed by the craters? I liked the concept, for the moon does hold many things in sway. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Handle every situation like a dog: if you can't eat it, or screw it, then piss on it and walk away!" - unknown
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

green eyes

I find the moon to be a fascinating subject. Well done! Always, Cat
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sweetspirit

16 years 10 months ago

Smiles

I love it and I love the moon I make reference to it in so many of my own writings.. Great job hun, Jen
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 10 months ago

thanks

Thank you everyone!I love night and I love the moon.

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