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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Aug 16, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fire in the Sky

Sky of fire and gold
and in between
The darkness
of the mountains

 

The river of flames
flow forever onwards
towards the sunset
where they intertwine
merge into one

 

flames leap into infinity
out through the universe
beyond all the star systems


Electric blue

— Electric Blue, Aug 16, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

WOW … Maggie the images in

WOW ... Maggie the images in this one is amazing ... breathtaking actually .. love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 9 months ago

Fire in the Sky

Jayne Thank you my friend for looking in on me I just love sky watching all hours of the day and night such wonderous colours and pictures i see I drift off on travels unknown The passions they invoke flames in my heart melt me away always blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Maggie

I love the sky in all its beauty , but I have a passion for the night sky ... I have always wanted a telescope lol might ask Santa for one this Year .. I really loved this one though Maggie its brillance was beautiful .. love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...