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Mystery

 Mystery Lost in his mystery am IPoetry in motion is heSo blue is my heartUntil he sees meLove me do






Electric Blue
— Electric Blue, Aug 08, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

awwwww Maggie

Such a short write from you but I loved it my friend .... beautifully inspired and I think I know what by LOL much much Love and big hugz Jayne ... So sorry I missed your calls this morning I was in la la land ... wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot I slept :D:D "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Mystery

Jayne Thank you my friend I actually wrote this on 12th july 2009 JUST a little ditty day dreaming again wishing I had a magic wand Tinks was not for hire Lol But I see where you coming from. I could of extended this to several verses but sitting in the rain at the tram stop looking up I see a plane in the sky going my way but to far away to hitch a ride Lol! It was the day John Lennon died the last line came to me But it was just enough words. Electric blue
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orgami

16 years 10 months ago

this is very good

last line threw me aside though its like a signature like I know and all I respect that Just I love the poem a heck of lot more to that point its actually very well done
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Mystery

Org Thank you my friend but as in Jaynes reply. I wrote this ditty on 12th july 2009 I was daydreaming longing to be elsewhere I look up and see a plane but it is just out of reach for me to get a hitch Lol! I never plan to write anything it just happens and then I saw a documentry on the death of John Lennon 12th july 1980 and he gave me the last line it just seemed to fit I love the picture it looks like you are searching for something which is just out of reach the look of longing dreaming always Electric Blue
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Mystery

D.S. Thank you my friend welcome to the neopoet family Just a ditty out of no where - well somewhere - my heart - of course thinking of the owner of my heart I just stream - just enough words I do not know about being clever it just is Electric Blue