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HOLLOW PILLOW

The day is ending and
i am desending to my
bed head down lights
out to tired to act the
clown

Emersed in dream of
what has been the night
slips by unnoticed, and
to its end i asend and
long for hollow pillow .
— ziggy, Aug 06, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

ziggy

Nicely stated. Watch the punctuation placement. I enjoyed the reading of this poem. Always, Cat