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Aug 05, 2009
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The River of Life
River of life Ray McLaren Aug2009 Ho ‘ river of life I dipped my toe I rememberBubbling, churning, urgent, swirling delight,Bubbles in French champagneIt tickled, it seduced, it sang me to sleeprunning down my face like a veil of rainbowsever lapping waves, mesmerizing, enchantingforever without end, this was life I bathed in its pure waters, ever young, and gayThe years went by and , day by dayThinking youth is surely here, to stay. then a golden glow bequeath my eyes silhouetted against the reddened sky
a boat of truth did my river run its name was Time, for my time had come. My friends aboard, it slow to move, my landlords craft, called in his dueswhile I’ hung around to play life’s dice, but then the mirror never lies came the day I raised my eyes, across the river of lifeSlow of tide, the river moved, thunder on the blooded skyI stood and smiled into the setting sun and realised my time had come
a boat of truth did my river run its name was Time, for my time had come. My friends aboard, it slow to move, my landlords craft, called in his dueswhile I’ hung around to play life’s dice, but then the mirror never lies came the day I raised my eyes, across the river of lifeSlow of tide, the river moved, thunder on the blooded skyI stood and smiled into the setting sun and realised my time had come
— believe, Aug 05, 2009
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