Under the Weeping Willow Tree has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

Under the Weeping Willow Tree
Has been selected for publication @ wikinut.com

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by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jul 12, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

poewriter58

16 years 10 months ago

Donnie

Take out many of the SHE'S in this story poem and you'll have it made Very nicely written otherwise. Beautiful story Chrys P.S. How have you been

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 10 months ago

Hi, Chrys I am the same old me. Are you the same ole you?

I have been over worked and undered paid over-fed and under loved. Streaching my bucks to try to make it but, but,those damn dears have slipped away, but all in all I am still blessed each and every day. Thanks for the evice. I didn't want to use any proper names in this story poem. I knew there was way to many "shes" but, util you said something I was contented with it, I am glad you brought it up Thanks. Donnie/Sinbad