Seren

Jun 27, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Feathered Thought

Tranquil thoughts
breathing
of slow kissed sights
comforted
in expelling this light
languorous trembled gaze

A mask promising nothing
yet yearning to taste
now pushed aside

Risking this pull
stakes everything

Claims made
forever washing
though tears of ecstasy
now rolling free of
ducted bliss
trailed warmth of
cored beings
exquisite dripping
yets

Serenades of wanting
traveling through blood
as feather breathes
brushed lightness
thieves strength
floating in
washes of joyed right

Unaltered and bare
lured to charm
unhooked to potent need
she is lost

Silkily softness crushed in satin
drawn to slither tight
set free to embrace
crystal screams
shattered
in feathers graced might

Masked
to be nothing
revealed
in breathlessness

— Seren, Jun 27, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 11 months ago

I swear

I was growing feathers when I was reading this and felt that I needed to take flight but not away from these lovely words!! lol:)fleur

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Awwwww Fleur

Thats the nicest compliment you could give me thank you, that was the effect I was trying for, hope your well and it isnt too cold down there its freezing here tonight lol .. Love Jayne x x

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

I was feeling rather angry, indignant and unsettled when I started reading your poem. Now I am at peace with your beautiful graceful imagery and message. Thank you for unruffling my feathers! Love, Cat

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Cat my Darling friend ...

I am so glad you found a little peace in this write for I found peace writing it , is was a slow easy piece that flowed out , the walls have been let down and I am letting the flow take me where it will now. I had a message today , someone said that if they want to relax they read my fantasy work or these poems , And I think that he had a point , I write these to bring myself to peace and in doing so bring everyone else with me ... relaxation poetry ? is there such a thing ? I guess there is but there isnt an actual catagory or is there ? lmao who knows I am flying the docters gave me sum stuff and its making my head spin will get back to you on that one I shall have a peruse round the net ... when I am more myself LOL ... Biggest hugs Jayne Love you , you are my favourite witch you know lol

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

awww

...big hugs... love, Cat the candlewitch

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Bigger ones back at you

Couldnt wouldnt shouldnt be without your favourite witch, and I am glad I have you around to cheer me up you always make me smile your one of the most special people Ive had the honor to call my friend enjoy your drink ;) LOL ... Love Jayne the serenity dragon LOL ...

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Seren

A very tasty piece of poetry. I shall dig further into that library of yours. Respectfully, Espen.

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Espen

This one is actually part of a series of sensuous poetry the first was shadow lusting's Gleam , so if you get time I am sure you would like that one too , btw I loved your poem Segue it was wonderful, I a music/singing teacher thats why the name caught my eye lol ;) Regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...

lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Seren.

Wonderful, can not get enough. You are very passionate in your writing. I wish I could get through all your work, but alas, the Phone, Ha, love all your versus so far. Luv Lyz.

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Lyz ...

You have all the time in the world hun take it , I get such a thrill when people like my poems that is part of my passion but my big passion is forming them guding them like babies and then letting you at at them and I love it when someone says NO its wrong makes me work harder LOl and thats a good thing ... talk to you soon hun you take care love and hugz Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...