All the grief, loss and trauma that's gone down this year, a senryu

bloody bloody crap
bloody bloody bloody shit
bloody well fuck off.

— weirdelf, May 29, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Critiques

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 1 month ago

Nice one Jess...

There you go, my friend, let it all out!!!!!!!! Sometimes the many things we bottle up can be said in fewest words...this says everything. I sure hope you feel better, and that the year ahead goes MUCH MUCH better than the last. *Lots of hugs* Peace, love, n hugs Katie

Darby Cain

17 years 1 month ago

AGREED

Darby Cain

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

Let it out Jess … I agree

Let it out Jess ... I agree Bloody bloody crap right enough lets hope it gets better :) Much love Jayne x x Hugz x x

weirdelf

17 years 1 month ago

It's got a whole lot better,

thanks to support from my Neopoets friends, family and those bloody communists we call the Australian Government. cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago

=(

I couldn't agree more. I do know about having a lousy year, and it is only half over! I hope you feel better very soon. Always, Cat

Jillian Botha

17 years ago

I could not have said it better.....

Take a deep breath Jess! And i wholeheartedly agree with every single word! Much love in script Jill Mistakes happen, do not dwell on them, live them, mourn them and move on to better things. (PS: if that does not work eat lots and lots of chocolate)

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Oh dear Jess …. I missed

Oh dear Jess .... I missed this one but I cannot wait for this filthy yr to be over its been the worst and here you Senryu well done Love and hugs Jayne x x

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