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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Mar 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Electric Blue Mermaid

I find water so soothing calming and sultry.To be bathed in the liquid essence of loveUmm a mermaid with electric blue hairFalling from her shoulders over her
Alabaster skin that shines with 



pearl essence glowing in my

deep dark grotto 

A siren to lure my love to capture his heart

and soul submerging ourselves into the

liquid warm which is so inviting so

sensual to be lost entwined in it

all in slow motion so to be able

to feel and follow every touch

and emotion that for me

lingers forever. To recapture the rapturethe essence in full gloryin my secluded grottoI can dream


dreams. These feelingsAre real Electric Blue
— Electric Blue, Mar 26, 2009

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

Electric blue Mermaid

Janice Me dreaming dreams where I can be what I want to be and with whom I want to be with. Where love is all around me. Thank you my friend Electric Blue
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 2 months ago

Elec..Blue..Mermaid...pom

E.B., You have said that your words just flow into your poems. Your dreams and visions must be so vivid. I work on my poems sometimes for hours, and always think that I should just try harder, be smarter than I am..... Oh well, my new piece is called "Not A Paradox"...that's me for you...wcw
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

Electric Blue Mermaid

WC The first line of this poem was inspired from a comment made by the Professor on my poem called Pandemonium. On reading that line the rest followed in seconds. As my mind wandered I was transported to my secluded grotto You say my dreams and visions are vivid so real to me are they. It is like being a voyer on myself and who is with me in my vision That being in my vision is always the same one sharing with me. There could be no other being that incites these feelings creating this ignited glow within me - and me in them. Thank you for your beautiful comment I know you work so hard on getting your poems written this is where we differ. To me you and a few others take so much time and effort in your write and it shows what a masterpiece they become. We all work differently but your poems seem to come from so much agony and pain. It is hard work. Suggestion. Do not think just try to let go and stream - see what happens! I will take a look at your new poem.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

I liked this one very much Maggie

Blue mermaid of the seven seas, you too can describe the indescribable, that melting of our beings in such joy we scarce can understand as it flows over, our minds melded together in the one embrace that is love. Ann of Norway
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

Electric Blue Mermaid

Ann I seemed to have touch the soul of some here. I just want to be able to experience all of this again. As this was the most amazing experience I have ever known with someone so special he owns my heart and soul always with me Evan when not together I can smell the essence of him around me on me I feel his touch his closeness his tender caress I hear his voice echo in my mind I see all of him inside and out amazing is he, he is poetry in motion in every way Thank you for your comments my friend Electric Blue
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Oh we poets!!

We have the imagination to colour the grey skies with rainbows and do so too. We experience passion so intensely and so beautifully as we can perhaps relax our thoughts in the togetherness of joy, our minds made silent in the act of love, giving our all to its expression. Others have thoughts about what they are doing and loose the spontaneity of the dance of life's creation, or they are thinking of someone else, or they are thinking about what happens next, not there in the present, expecting other things to happen when it is there. Oh I had better stop this is in a 'public' place I am writing and I might get carried away with the thought of it all! Oyoy Ann
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Yes I do like this...

To have my own little grotto and share it with someone I love, I can only dream, but it's a nice one. Wish I was a real mermaid, perhaps my merman is in the sea and that's why I can't find love on the land. They say there's someone for everyone, well I wish he'd cross my path, still I live and hope. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Nice formatting

I love the way your formatted this one and of course your meaning behind it. Just a lovely poem her and hope everything is going good for you blue. magics02 xoxoxo