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Feb 20, 2009
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Drive - driven
Driven am I to write
It is like breathing to me
I cannot rest
not enough time
my mind races on
for rhythm and rhyme
Words fall tumble
from my pen in hand
as the paper waits
for the next line
What will come next
Will I get any rest
A thought a sound
is all I need
to be led
Re your next read
words tumble so fast
But will they follow
It is like breathing to me
I cannot rest
not enough time
my mind races on
for rhythm and rhyme
Words fall tumble
from my pen in hand
as the paper waits
for the next line
What will come next
Will I get any rest
A thought a sound
is all I need
to be led
Re your next read
words tumble so fast
But will they follow
— Electric Blue, Feb 20, 2009
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Critiques
Sam Vargo
17 years 3 months ago
I like this.
Electric Blue
17 years 3 months ago
Drive - Driven
Electric Blue
17 years 3 months ago
Drive-driven