Electric Blue

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I Am

I am all of these

Water     -      Aquarian in my secret grotto
Earth      -      My woods the standing people
Fire          -      Such passion that burns inside of me
Air            -      Not only do I breathe it in - also to be as free as - too

Electric blue

— Electric Blue, Feb 09, 2009

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Quillsvein1

17 years 3 months ago

clever rhyme

scheme you had going to from beginning to end, and this most mysterious line you have here: "Aquarian in my secret grotto"--wow! A turn of the surreal. And then, yes you are, the electric blue! lol. nice job! GB

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

I Am

Welcome my friend I was trying to describe myself in a few words Water - as an Aquarian of course the water carrier - I just love my secret grotto Woods - I at home walking the woods,mountains. My standing people my family - trees Fire - I love to watch it dance to feel its warmth but is is the passion inside of me Air - not only to breathe but being as free as the universe inside and outside of me. Electric Blue

Debra Bryant

17 years 3 months ago

Maggie,

You captue it all in a very few words! Well done. Debbie~

Electric Blue

17 years 3 months ago

I AM

D B Thank you my friend I agree - it is just enough words no more no less Electric blue

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Nice idea

....burnS inside of me? The S. I don't quite understand the last word 'too'. Just a wee comment from Ann

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

I Am

Ann Re they typo corrected re the "S" and the last word "Too" meaning to be free as the air we breathe. Thank you for looking up some of my poems. There are a variety but I love nature and the elements in their full glory. I write whatever comes depending on mood too. always Electric Blue

Janice Pearce

17 years 2 months ago

I AM

Maggie I enjoyed this one. This description of yourself, truly in tune with nature~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

I Am

Janice I question myself often asking "who am I" This is what I came up with. Just enough words that is all it took Thank you for checking out my poetry Always Electric Blue

professor

17 years 2 months ago

This is you indeed Maggie

Sometimes it doesn't take many words and thoughts to express the essence of who you are. Keith

Electric Blue

17 years 2 months ago

I Am

Keith Well the saying goes that the best things come in the smallest packages. Well I fit into this Ha! No This is the real me. always Thank you for your comments. Electric blue