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Blossom

As I walk along,
before me I see.
A cluster of clouds,
Pink - white and green.

The Apple blossom tree
that lingers so high
whispers in the breeze.
Gently  sigh.

Onwards upwards,
Trees reach for the sky.
Sending forth
there satin gems.

In the  airstream.
Until their journey
ends.

Floating downwards,
like the suns rays.
Awake the daydreams,
of a summers day.
— Electric Blue, Dec 04, 2008

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Blossom

Lonnie Thank you my friend. I am lost in daydreams. but this is just a walk on a summer's day electricblue
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

Blossom poem

E.B., You're something else. I'm beginning to think I should learn about poetry. My mind is stuck trying to make sense of things. Maybe I could use a catastrophy. A way to carve emotions a little deeper into my brain. Oh. E.B., Nice poem about a daydream. You're terriffic. wcw
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Blossom

WC When you say, you are trying to learn about poetry? The thing is - for me - I do not. I feel it stops the natural flow of free thinking. This vision is still with me evan though it was many years ago. A moment captured in time. To replay over and over again. When I am feeling down. I let my vision replay. I am back to that beautiful day in an instant. A beautiful sunny day. A day to wander, Day for daydreaming. I walked to the end of the road. I took a right turn at the top of the hill. I looked down the hill. The street lined with Apple blossom trees. As I walked down the hill. A gentle breeze blew, and cast adrift some apple blossom, satin petals. I just watched them dance in the airstream. I watched in wonder. What if I were one of those satin petals? Where would I travel too! So light, so free............. To daydream Thank you for joining me on my journey. Keep this daydream for when your feeling down. It will lift you so. Always Electricblue
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poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Maggie

You needn't have explain. Your poem produced lovely images well done Chrys
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

blossom

Chrys Thank you my friend. Some people like to know the story behind the poem. I just want to explain that it is still as if it was today. I feel the soft breeze brush my face gently. The warmth of the sun radiates through me. Endless days of summer. Electricblue
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Blossom

Thank you for bringing me there~ I needed this, as it is bitterly cold out and the snow will not quit, it's piling up now. Thoughts of your summer day are helping my frame of mind! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Blossom

Janice I hope you could feel the warmth of the summer. Brush gently against your face. To make you feel serene. Just take a walk. Step into my poem Endless days of summer I hope it melted the snow for you my friend. Electricblue
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zarul

17 years 5 months ago

HI

WAT A SOOTHING poem this is. very beautiful. it takes me there and that. great imageries. the message of this poem is quite similar to my SUB-CONSCIOUS MIND poem. feel free to check it out. and comment it. HUG ZARUL