Snowing

In the stillness of the dawn
The sun filters through the morn.

Shadows start to disappear
Making things crystal clear.

Snow has fallen in the night
All is still - covered white

In the branches - nothing stirs
A dusting of white cover ferns

Crisp and clean - clear and bright
As snow falls through the night.

— Electric Blue, Dec 03, 2008

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Critiques

W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

Snow poem

E.B., A rhyming poem EB! I like this one. wcw

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

ahh snow.....

beautiful so long as I don't have to clean it off anything, or drive in it.... LOL! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If the opposite of 'pro' is 'con' would that make the opposite of 'progress' Congress? Just wonderin'....."

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Snowing

Jess Thanks It was a beautiful scene, but it was a picture. So no having to dig it up or clear it off Ha! Electricblue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Snowing

WC Thank you. Story behind the poem. I wrote this in seconds. I saw a picture on the wall at work. It was of a snow scene. It was of a log cabin and tall ferns. During the day the light changed on the picture. So to me it became alive. I was transported into the picture. I walked but there, but left no footprints in the snow. I always want to be the first, to make my mark there. The coolness of the night. my breath exhaled into a mist fresh snow fallen. snow flakes tumble down from above. Electricblue

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Blue

Beautiful poem. I love snow, for maybe a day, but adore it all the time...in pictures, otherwise y'all are welcome to it. *G* Loved the poem, great flow and fine rhyme. Well done. Respectfully, Rett: "If law abiding citizens are denied guns, the police don't need theirs. After all, the criminals aren't feared, just the law abiding citizens." Rett

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

snowing

Rett Thank you. I am honoured i was able to take you on my journey. I get lost in pictures I enter the picture and become part of it. Electricblue

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Excellent

Nothing more need be said.

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Snowing

Nice images, nice flow~ You brought me into your picture! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Snowing

Janice I am happy you were able to enter the picture too enjoy the adventure electricblue