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Ode of Remembrance - Flanders Fields - Lost souls - LANGERMARK

My visit to the wargraves - so many lost souls

As I entered the graveyard
I felt the darkness,of the underworld.
This sadness is, oppressing.

I can hear, their lost souls,
crying out against the injustice.
The futility of all this?

The tears of these young men.
They are so lost?
Their cries in the wilderness,
goes unheard.

They are so cold, so hungry.
So alone are they.
They can never ever,
go home again.

To see them,
just wandering,
in the wilderness.
They long, for the
sunshine again.

But this can never be.
They will wander alone.
Lost in the darkness.
Until the end of time.

You enter through the
doorway of darkness.
Into the underworld.

You see the sunset
light up the statues
of the four soldiers
guarding the other
gateway.

As you enter the darkness,
you are overcome.
With the oppressiveness
the clammy atmosphere,
Of the unknown.

You can feel the anguish,
of these lost souls.
That have been forgotten -
abandon by the world.

You can feel the touch
of the outstretched hands,
Reaching out to be rescued.
From the horror's,
of eternal darkness.

There they lay in the cold,
dark, damp mud.
Unable to move,
from whence they lay.

Their hearts so heavy.
They feel so, unloved.

These young boys
left home in such high spirits.
To be the best, their country,
families, could bestow.
These glorious victors.

But what did these young men, find?
To be in this foreign land.
Nothing but  cold, wet, weather.
Mud, mud and more mud.

All the promises by the Fatherland,
not in sight.
Only the endless toil
of surviving the day.

Not from the enemy, their foes.
But of mother nature.
Darkness, rain-
only to remain in the mud,
forever.

The elements,
were the enemy of their lives.
Not their foes?

They died where they fell.
In the darkness.
Abandon of all hope of seeing
the sunshine again.

All boys together,
because that is all they were?
Young boys.

Thousands of names carved in stone
Will no-one remember them!
These tragic, lost souls.

They wander, so alone
in the darkness.
They will not be, forgotten
As we, who visit them -
will remember.

To let them know
that the world can never,
ever, have enough
forgiveness.

This place of sorrow,
and the tears of those
who rest, in this place.

We who are left,
will cry their tears,
for them.

They are, as stars above -
They will never be forgotten,
by those who visit
this place.

Called. LANGERMARK
— Electric Blue, Nov 11, 2008

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Fareeda Moin

17 years 6 months ago

Ode of Rememberance.......

A very moving poem. War is a horrible thing. Thousands and thousand of young men die. They are someones sons, someones brothers, someones fiances, someones friends, someones husbands and someones grand children. They are all thrown in the furnace of aimless war. Ultimately the winners and the vanquished suffer alike. Thanks for your invaluable feelings for them. Fareeda.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Flanders Field

hello Fareeda Thank you for reading my poem my tribute to all these lost souls. The injustice of war wether it is past present or future anywhere on this planet. Did it really solve anything? but those who survive live with the memories the realities constantly. I was just so move and overpowered by their presence. With the going down of the sun, We will remember them - all. electricblue
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Maggie

Fitting tribute to our soldiers and veterans. Nicely written, and very moving. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- "Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes."
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Flanders Field

hello Jess Thank for reading this tribute. I feel as long as we remember that they did not die in vain. So sad but now i see a field of blood Red poppies and it is them they raise their heads high once more so they can reach for the sky in the noon day sun. Electricblue maggie
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Lonnie

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you, Electricblue!

Just what this aging Vet needed to read this Veteran's Day! A fitting and heartfelt tribute to all who have given all! Thank you so much for writing this one!
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Flanders Field

hello Lonnie My Friend, especially today I know we remember them. But we should remember them everyday. If it was not for them we would not have the freedom we have today. That wonderfull field of blood Red poppies are all these lost souls holding their heads high as the reach for the noon day sun. Be at peace my freind. Electricblue maggie.
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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 6 months ago

Ode of Rememberance.......

A befitting tribute to young victims of war. Heartwrenching. I join you in your tears and pray for the departed souls. -Mohammad
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 6 months ago

Ode of Remembrance Flanders Fields

hello Mohammed I think all war is only for the politians. So many lost one's it is so senseless. Thank you my friend for reading and taking time out today. Electricblue
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orgami

17 years 6 months ago

My grandmas brothers

four of them served when my grandparents died and the house was emptied I inherited the photos in boxes there were many crystal clear sepia images of them in their crisp uniforms or sitting in a truck of the day somehow they all survived the war I have read many stories from a lot of battle times and met many veterans Their sacrifice will not be forgotten this is a great poem in their memory and the sadness of loss which comes in all wars harvests
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Maggie...

Your feelings were composed to share with all... a moving write! thanks for posting your experience at Flanders Field... a receptive being you are... Richard