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Lost in the mists of time

Lost in the mist of time
down by the rivers edge
The mist surrounds me
I blow the awaiting horn

Out of the mist
a tall dark stranger appears
It is the Ferryman
I cross his palm
with silver
then step into
the awaiting boat

Down the river Styx
and fade
into the distance
to be seen
nevermore

The world
around me
no longer exists
only a grey mist

The sound
of the river
as the ferryman
poles us across

Errie silence falls
I tremble with such
foreboading

— Electric Blue, Sep 02, 2008

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panaella

17 years 9 months ago

eerie

Hello, There is a sense of, as you put it 'foreboding' within your poem. Crafting your vocabulary has helped achieve this effect. I liked it. Regards, Ellie
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 9 months ago

Death Calls me

Ellie Panaella Thank you for you interest in my poem. It is a place i have too many times and still wonder why am I here, What for? I do not plan to write anything but it does depend on my mood - this a time when is was down. I get an idea then the words flow like a river until it is down. Thank you my friend - I will check out your poetry