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Love Conquers All has been selected for publication@ Triond.com

Love Conquers All
Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, May 28, 2008

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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purplemoondoll

18 years ago

Yes I really like this but

Yes I really like this but felt it could be structured a little differently to bring the images to life? See what you think - you may hate this suggestion:- I onced believed this nursery rhyme Now my eyes weep, my brain battered Fish eyes dried and raspberry foam Replace the fairy tale Now I am dreamless and alone And so on please ignore me if you like it the way it is.Watch your spelling too there are few errors so it may be worth checking it though. It's good to read your work again. Cheers Kaz x It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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DarkinAZ

18 years ago

Love conquers,

a mans otherwise strong heart, then punishes him for it. Such a trojan horse love is. Sincerely, Mark
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years ago

Mark I could not have said it any better than that a trojan

Horse or a condom for so many of us in this world put a thin silky bairrer between the ones we love and ourselves we rarely ever get to expirance the other fully for what ever reason shame guilt hurt embaresment religion lack of it so we come in in that trojan horse per say Spot on Hammer down driven that thought home Trojan Horse I'll have to keep that in mind Thanks Mark Hope all is well with you and yours Donnie/ Sinbad P.s. you to Kaz I hope your Felling Good and doing just as well Donnie/ Sinbad
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years ago

Hello and Thankyou

I got My box back but it has not worked corectly yet and this just pop in my head so I stuck here, hate to do it this way but I am such a scatter brain as of late and don't have any other word processor I can't read my own writting some times stressing over not having a car or a place to take the kids haven't seen since jan. Iam still working on a lot of these i DON'T KNOW IF THE'LL ever get done I've checked with the spell checker here and I know they don't always cath the corret word and it's spelling for the meaning but with out my dictanry on my computer I never finger it out I always apreciate comments Although I don't always Know how to change for the better I like others Ideas I was trying to cacth the reader here for if they dont read the title as the first line of the poem they sometimes get lost for a minute and must reread to understand instead of saying here is the poem I try to get poeple to put themselves into the poem Don't know if Iam gettig that done but I am trying Thanks Again Donnie/ Sinbad
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stavroula

18 years ago

wow thats incredible. i love

wow thats incredible. i love the style of your writing. the way you tell us a story of how it is. you can truely feel the emotion in your writing. great job! "For now my eyes are weeping and my brain is battered and bruised Fish eyes, dried " that line is so cool
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you so much for

Your lovely commits/ Donnie / Sinbad the Sailor Man/ I can't get to the berry as often as before and I usally forget my note books if I do make it up here I will be away for awhile had issues at Home grave important issues and no means to solve them depression has a great hold on me as of late sorry I could not respon until today Thank you again Kind words are much value as are constucted critizims
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Great Poem Sailor

Smiles:) Barbara Is love the fairy tale Forgive my vague understanding, hope to get better. Doctor and test all day. still waiting on results.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

Not just love

the Title "Love Conquers All" there lies the Fairy tale in this poem But as for myself I still beleive this here phrase for I am a believer John 3:16 as I listen to those who say they don't believe in God I see clearer My beliefs are sound for most of them are angry and upset At the all powerful God That he has not just fixed everything and put it All right but unless you yourself seek the meanings and find a good teacher who will go through the the Good Book chapter by chapter and verse by verse you must rely on what your gut or consions tells you who you are is who you'll be just look around and you will see but be careful as where you are looking for the time is at hand some times a tumor must be lefted alone so it will grow and reveal its whole self now when One set his self to surviale he or she will try any thing Vitamine D in mass quantities sunshine as much as you can stand fresh clean water and air low stress Death begins in the colon they say cleanse it fresh juices get a juicer juices everything you can get your hands on as long as it is fresh and not altered Oatmeal I hated it as a kid but it is a good regulator Us americans we eat to much processed foods some of us don't have much of a choice but there lies the problem its our choies that make us Ill cleaning agents food that is dead when we eat it by way of being over perversed we know in are hearts that Money is the root of All evil or what it brings Power but very thing in modaration once your healthly again should not harm us but than again just believe youll be better and then go after it like there is no tommorrow Donnie/ Sinbad the Sailor Man