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Alobar
Apr 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fifth Haiku

                                           Blue sky, filled with sun,

                                           All creatures play, ignoring

                                           rain on horizon.
— Alobar, Apr 07, 2008

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 2 months ago

Spring

haaaaaaaaaa....sigh....that is what spring brings.
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 2 months ago

Yes..

thanks for sharing with us...it turned out right pretty down here in the south today..still kind of cool.. but nice. Richard
Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

18 years 2 months ago

No need to critique?

That's like putting me in a room with chocolate and saying "it's just for show" It's just plain mean. Fine, be that way. Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
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Alobar

18 years 2 months ago

No need, but please feel

No need, but please feel free always; your words, caustic or otherwise, are always highly valued.
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poewriter58

18 years 2 months ago

I agree

with Jon still cold where I am but a lovely refreshing Haiku all the same nice work Chrys