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Apr 01, 2008
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Princess
Outside in the doorway
She stands morose against the rain,
Lavishly Sucking
On the sixteenth cigarette of the night.
Her ladies in waiting
Cackle mindlessly beside her,
Picked for their fat
And grotesque orange faces.
With practised grace she stamps out her fag,
Slightly her skirt rides up,
Showing off a glimpse
Of her pale, blueish thigh.
A mess of her bleached locks
Brings them back into line,
Checks her face in the compact
For any cracks in the mask.
And with heeled run she goes in,
Back to the bar and her men,
Vodka in hand, Bad opinion on tongue
She searches the room for a stallion to ride.
— Kieran Nelson, Apr 01, 2008
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Critiques
Jonathan Moore
18 years 2 months ago
Well done
Kieran Nelson
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks very much for the
Skumpfsklub
18 years 2 months ago
Well, she won't lack long--there is a market for that stuff
Kieran Nelson
18 years 2 months ago
Wow I hadn’t even noticed
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
You paint the picture of a
Liamb
18 years 1 month ago
Do we know her?
Kieran Nelson
18 years 1 month ago
I don’t, no! Btw, when I