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waterdragon
Feb 29, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Terminal Life

 

Life is

a disease

from which we never

      recover,

main side effect?

 

Death

 

Guaranteed every time

 

Once we start

      being human

there's always only one way

we can end

 

Dead

 

Life

is a terminal disease

— waterdragon, Feb 29, 2008
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eric ashford

18 years 4 months ago

No kidding, you figured this

No kidding, you figured this out all by your self? This breaks no new ground for me. Write some poetry next time. Try to write about life or death from what you have experienced of it not trot out yet another cliche. All the best eric
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waterdragon

18 years 4 months ago

Sarcasm or

irony...hmmm...I invite you to read my other poetry, and see if I haven't already done what you ask. Peace! Reverend Bec Hudson Shine Your Light It's the ONLY Way to Get Rid of the Darkness!
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eric ashford

18 years 4 months ago

Smiles, I have since seen

Smiles, I have since seen some of your work. Yes you are a good writer, sorry I missed the irony. We English accuse Americans of this, looks like some irony blindness has rubbed off on me. All the best eric

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