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You Young People
Step up young man, step up, make things right even when you are wronged
These are not the words of a song but, to life without strife
Imposing instead of posing, meddling in, instead of building on
Whose toes do you step on? I hope those who would stomp on yours
Every one of us, is a piece to the great puzzle, although some of us, don't know where we may fit
Placed in we still get, I often times wonder where I would be; if I was not tossed next to the pieces
I have seen and been fitted with and against
Better off I sometimes think but, then I realize if not for them I may have been
Neutralized
Knocked to the floor and stepped upon or kicked into a heating vent
Instead, because of them I am moved in and about this puzzle still
Being pushed against and placed next too and turned about
Then left alone a bit, until I have been found a place to try and fit
So young people do not pull out your chair and leave the puzzle, upon the table
Life is a mystery, someone will pick you up eventually and try to fit you in, it is all up to you
If not the last piece always completes the puzzle
Even when lost your outline still remains
In time of need, of desires, and fearing the end of the puzzle is near
In someones hands I have always found myself
Held the most
Pause take a breath, feel the hands, feel their
Warmth
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Critiques
Quillsvein1
18 years 4 months ago
how terribly
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 4 months ago
Glad you read it and pointed those lines out
poewriter58
18 years 4 months ago
life is a jig saw puzzle
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you