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You Young People

Step up young man, step up, make things right even when you are wronged

These are not the words of a song but, to life without strife

Imposing instead of posing, meddling in, instead of building on

Whose toes do you step on? I hope those who would stomp on yours

Every one of us, is a piece to the great puzzle, although some of us, don't know where we may fit

Placed in we still get, I often times wonder where I would be; if I was not tossed next to the pieces

I have seen and been fitted with and against

Better off I sometimes think but, then I realize if not for them I may have been

                                                         Neutralized

Knocked to the floor and stepped upon or kicked into a heating vent

Instead, because of them I am moved in and about this puzzle still

Being pushed against and placed next too and turned about

Then left alone a bit, until I have been found a place to try and fit

So young people do not pull out your chair and leave the puzzle, upon the table

Life is a mystery, someone will pick you up eventually and try to fit you in, it is all up to you

If not the last piece always completes the puzzle

Even when lost your outline still remains

In time of need, of desires, and fearing the end of the puzzle is near

In someones hands I have always found myself

Held the most

Pause take a breath, feel the hands, feel their

Warmth

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jan 24, 2008

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Quillsvein1

18 years 4 months ago

how terribly

true, particularly these poignant lines: "So young people do not pull out your chair and leave the table/Someone will pick you up eventually and try to fit you in/If not the last piece always completes the puzzle even when lost your outline still Remains..." we imagine ourselves to stand outside this gigantic corrupt puzzle of the world, particuarly in extreme youth, only to find that we ourselves have been made part of it even with the roughest, most resistant edges. (unless we really decide to do something about it, which is rare). great poem, crushingly true.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 4 months ago

Glad you read it and pointed those lines out

I'm still looking to fine tune this one I wanted something to cast a shadow of light into the darken hearts and souls which amass every day from whatever may come I was for the longest time willing to pull the curtains down and walk blindly into to the light be it firey or sublime I was ready to leave so glad I have not so much here yet to be learned and expireanced thank you Donnie/Sinbad
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poewriter58

18 years 4 months ago

life is a jig saw puzzle

Love the concept and you had some very strong ideas and lines and sound advice Chrys
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 2 months ago

Thank you

I have been having I meltdown these last few months so hard to stay focus on real important things need to find my center again I am sure I will Welcome to the site like your nickname and the works you have posted If I have comitted I will have to reread but I alittle preoctupied at the present to remember Donnie/ Sinbad