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Like the Tin Man
A former model citizen, I no longer posse the heart
To pump these tired limbs, now just rusting away in the pool of fools
From all these tears but, not those of sadness, or of joy but, because of Joy
She left for good this time, I can only hope
I was a golden Knight, in high polished armor
Now just a shell rusting away
A man with golden locks is, now simply bald
The shinning funnel, that onced filled me up it is now flipped
It's a rusty, oily funnel placed upon my head, for a hat
All our memories flushing out of, the tip top bottom end of it
Steaming and smoking, and circling about my head
No Axe, do I hold in my right hand, for no wheel do I have for to grind
In my left hand hold I, the oil can now emptied it of it's last drop
Soon I will no longer be able to twist and shout or even speak
For the magistrates is lurking about
Waiting to turn me out, and grind me up
Least by some chance I be saved, from the pending scrap heap
By some fair maid, O' tender lady, please splash me with some thirty weight ten
On these old rusted joints spread some warm lube
Let lose this here Knight; let's, let the night lose
Let me stay, sing, and dance about, here with you again
Let me love once more, least that old witch water me down for sure
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Critiques
Kieran Nelson
18 years 4 months ago
Liked.
Sinbadthesailorman
15 years 11 months ago
Just a coincidence