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weirdelf
weirdelf
Jan 11, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Me, me, me

 

 

I am stupid and useless

and smell

and have a terrible personality

and everyone hates me.

 

I am intelligent, talented,

witty and charming

and everyone craves my company.

 

Or something.

 

 

— weirdelf, Jan 11, 2008

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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purplemoondoll

18 years 6 months ago

A paradox

A paradox, expressed extremely well. I can relate. Nicely done. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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orgami

18 years 6 months ago

nice short

well your certianly not useless but i know the feeling like this poem also O
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

18 years 6 months ago

Tit for tat either or

Nice but I like the one my kids use when they taunt each other goes something like this Whane everybody hates me nobody likes me I guess I'll go sit in the corner and eat worms They don't every come back the the other side though I guess that would not make any sense to their taunt but this is a visa versa Ideal neat
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margaret welsh

18 years 6 months ago

me me me

im sure this poem is def fic weirdelf but i like it
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

nah, it's real

I feel both sides equally, but never bland, pretty fucked up, eh. cheers, Jess
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Quillsvein1

18 years 6 months ago

i think everyone

can have days where they feel both are true simultaneously, and both emotions can seem quite authentic--which by extension makes the reality and truth of our intuitions very questionable. i don't know--you're good enough, you're smart enough, and god darnit, people like you, jess.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Thank you both,

self-esteem is seldom an issue with me these days. Although the poem is true, I still feel both sides, most mornings I wake up glad to be Jess. cheers, Jess
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 1 month ago

Are you sure

that you're not bipolar? This sounds oddly familiar. Best, Ronda
dhruv

dhruv

17 years 11 months ago

Your positives would be

Your positives would be useless if you did not have your negatives to compare them to. I loved this, though this is something that crossed my mind just so many times around. Dhruv

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