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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Nov 12, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

"Muse the Finale" five of five (V of V) has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

"Muse the Finale" five of five (V of V)
Has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

http://nut.bz/28qi.osv/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 12, 2007

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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whitetea

whitetea

18 years 6 months ago

As far as rhythm goes

As far as rhythm goes you're there, I loved how each line tumbled into the next. I admire poetry that is expressed originally, and there is nothing I can compare this to. I like to read about others who watch and reflect on the lives of others. I do this when I bus a few miles out daily. This reminds me of that, when I see scraps of peoples lives whether I know or don't know them and piece it together. This is good stuff and I really look forward to whatever else you share.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 5 months ago

Thanx Bunches

By clicking on a poets nick name. Useally hightlighted in blue you can go to there profile, and see all their works, and put them on your buddy list too. I first tried too find their stuff in the stream and it was too hard, and it took to long, so click on thir nick name. You should go straight to their profiles next to# sumitted by:_______________ #
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 5 months ago

Thanx Dab, This was a try a short story type of peom.

I've seen some and like the idea of making the reader wait. To see if they would countinue to seach out, the anwser to the reasoning of the poem. The first report was rushed and wrote after the first three "Muse" Poems so it still needs work maybe I get too them soon. Thanx Donnie /Sinbad
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Don't put me on a pedestal man,

I'm just this bloke who reads voraciously and dabbles poetically, I love you and this site because you put me in my place when I get too big for my britches. Are we having fun yet? cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice