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Scared and Alone

You hold your head down,
Unsure how you feel,
A week ago this didn't
seem real.

But it is, it's here,
A part of your life,
Not here to get you
into strife.

Maybe a chance,
New path, new beginning,
I know your head is
probably spinning.

A change of path,
Detour at most,
Allow and opportunity,
A form of growth.

Options are out there,
To help those like you,
Whatever you choose,
I am here for you.

Ignore the dark thoughts,
Forming in your mind,
You're stronger than you
think you'll find.

The doubts,
They now cease to exist,
Don't doubt me now,
You throw away that list.

Determined I am,
Fine you'll be,
Honest to God,
Soon you'll see.

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hi there few suggestions for you to chew on

"But it is, it's here,
A part of your life,
Not here to get you
into strife." ,,,,,,,,I was thinking
"but so it is here
a part of your life
not hear for strive, ,,,,,,,

"You're stronger than you
think you'll find,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,you're stronger than that ,,,,,,,,,,,

chat soon ,,,,,,,,,,zigs

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