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LOVE ME AS A ROSE
Roses fade
yes...
but they never die...
they live in books
till end of time
recalling those moments
since lapsed,
instantly
love roses only
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Tue, 2022-09-13 18:56
Hi, Lovedly,
Yes! We all have a few rose petals planted in old books, reminding us of those we love. Something completely romantic. Lovely poem.
L
lovedly
Tue, 2022-09-13 19:23
my blood is red
'twill ROMANCE
till I'm dead
thnx
scribbler
Tue, 2022-09-13 23:35
hi loved
Line 6 try something like"recalling those moments" For some reason just sounds more poetic to me.......