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LOVE ME AS A ROSE

Roses fade
yes...
but they never die...

they live in books
till end of time

recalling those moments
since lapsed,
instantly
love roses only

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Yes! We all have a few rose petals planted in old books, reminding us of those we love. Something completely romantic. Lovely poem.
L

'twill ROMANCE
till I'm dead
thnx

author comment

Line 6 try something like"recalling those moments" For some reason just sounds more poetic to me.......

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