Mike

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destiny

Posted Jun 30, 2010 · 20 lines · 2 critiques

Would you for once just give me a little break
I am well aware that this is just another mistake
Today I saw you again and tomorrow I will awake
Could you spare me another morning for goodness sake

I had already found a way to let you go
Finally stopped time from moving way too slow
Yet no idea about what I truthfully know
All faded when you sincerely said hello

Looking absolutely stunning in your dress
Turning my emotions into a misleading mess
Another page wasted, your beauty I can't express
Just know that I really needed you to say yes

After all there ain't no real solution
We learned a lot through our evolution

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Don't wanna move on to another revolution
Feels like I give in to my retribution

Without you I don't just feel alone
What scares me is that I become unknown
Since you left me a lot I have grown
But I feel like I fight here on my own

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30 Wed

Received a critique
on destiny from @magics02
"I have not read you in a bit and I am glad to stumble upon you once again here. I like this story/like poem. I do think if you broke it down some perhaps a little example of this would be as such I worked a little for y…"
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on destiny from @Alice Ember
"It looks fine to me. godd job on this one Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to"
30 Wed

Posted a poem
destiny
"Would you for once just give me a little break"
Open thread 20 lines
30 Wed

Received a critique
on Cor.... from @Alice Ember
"Haha, it seems we're both in love pain at the moment though i'm fairly sure yours is worse 'cause i spend the whole time trying to fend of the love he was trying to force feed me. I guess he got sick of it and left, tha…"
22 Tue

Posted a poem
Cor....
"It seems there is no way to get you out of my head"
Open thread 22 lines
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Time
"For more than weeks you're ignoring me"
Open thread 20 lines
May 2010
15 Sat

Highest posting month
May 2010 — 9 poems
March 2009
25 Wed

First critique offered
on "A TRIBUTE TO A VERY SPECIAL MOTHER ." by @IRENE
14 Sat

First publication
Whispering Emptiness

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