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hawk256
Member since July 3, 2026
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Tense weaves under the light ceiling
Tense weaves under the light ceiling
Wind comes to sweep the vague emptiness
Short and thin trail
Silently weaving our thread
No one notices the shine
Almost invisible in the hand
Spinning the trail of fate
Dust turns into a song
We are of pure silk
Born from fatigue and tenderness
Breathing through the cracks
Where the light throws its parties
Thread by thread
Cold white
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Sun touches the ends of the paper
Tangled sky falls
Light flight without a hat
Everything beautiful soon fades
No one notices the shine
Almost invisible in the hand
Thin trail of destiny
Dust turns into a song
We are of pure silk
Born from fatigue and tenderness
Breathing through the cracks
Where the light throws its parties
Thread by thread
Cold white
Weightless
Without any trace
Silk that disappears
Changes its name
Forgets to be
We are of pure silk
Born from fatigue and tenderness
Breathing through the cracks
Where the light throws its parties
Thread by thread
Cold white
hawk256’s timeline
- July 2026
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15 WedHighest posting month
July 2026 — 7 poems
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08 WedReceived a critique
on We want the white people to be our friends from @Human Cultist
"I can see there’s a strong sense of conviction in this poem, and that gives it a clear voice right away. The opening is direct, so the reader immediately understands the direction you’re taking, which can be effective w…" -
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03 FriReceived a critique
on Worn shoes on the cold sidewalk from @W. Barrett Munn
"There are a lot of interesting ideas here. The walk between two people separated could be expanded. Good thoughts here. Where the poems falls short is in the telling rather than showing of the actions. Revision amounts…" -
03 FriFirst publication
Worn shoes on the cold sidewalk
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03 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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Location: CAN
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Grateful every day
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Baby don't leave me
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Goodbye Shirley, my dear friend
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I will make through This day
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Worn shoes on the cold sidewalk
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