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GRiM
Member since November 20, 2009
Member for 16 years, 6 months
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Beyond the Moonlight
I glow beyond the Moonlight,
My beating heart,
is a burning fight,
that i cannot win apart.
Come and take my hand,
I've only come this far,
to allow myself to stand,
and look beyond the stars.
I came to live upon your grace,
I'm the wolf of the night;
My eyes seek your beautiful face,
beyond the moonlight...
GRiM’s timeline
- November 2024
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19 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- November 2019
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19 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2014
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19 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2010
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19 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2010
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09 SatReceived a critique
on Beyond the Moonlight from @Pamela A. Lamppa
"This is filled with personal emotion and care. There is nothing finer than the moonlight and a poet filled with love. Thank you for sharing this one. ~Pamela" -
01 FriReceived a critique
on Suicide Silence from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Short and to the point, not over done. Like a breath of wind and it's over. First things first- capitalize "I" when referring to yourself. Proper grammar, doesn't look so amateur or slangish. Poem has a strange, almost…" - December 2009
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15 TueHighest posting month
December 2009 — 6 poems
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11 Fri
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07 Mon
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04 FriReceived a critique
on Trust or Dust from @blistered-pen
"short but just true, you know? I honestly love when people write about lies, everyone has different takes on lying and it makes for great reading; short or long. I saw your short story post, and I'm honestly not one for…" -
04 FriPosted a poem
November's Blood
"He walks in the valley of the shadows, Fontana, the city of blood. It was a fresh sunny day at the end of November. A small brown boy, the age of sixteen, was on his way to see a girl...the girl he loved. In black pants and a green patterned with black and white sweater. His hair, were black spikes of doom. As he stepped, he was closer and closer to a broken heart. When Fabian Reyes got to her, he has his eyes set on an angel. She was a diamond, a human diamond. Her eyes were two specs of a star, her hair; heaven's formula. She was a light colored girl, Janett Cardinez. " -
01 TueFirst publication
The End of the Road
- November 2009
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20 FriFirst critique offered
on "Progeny" by @Bert Lamrick
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19 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 12 days later.
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Beyond the Moonlight
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November's Blood
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Trust or Dust
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Two Black Crows
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