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GRiM
Dec 04, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Trust or Dust

The greatest vision,
Is one's eyes;
The worst ambition,
Is one's lies.
— GRiM, Dec 04, 2009

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blistered-pen

16 years 6 months ago

ooh, I like!

short but just true, you know? I honestly love when people write about lies, everyone has different takes on lying and it makes for great reading; short or long. I saw your short story post, and I'm honestly not one for short stories, but maybe I'll check it out. For now, I have a cake to ice! PS the title.. Hm. I don't really think anything of it, and I don't want to come off as an asshole saying that. :) I feel that it's JUST a title, but then again, I'm not so great with titles. I have over 30 untitled poems, so I can't offer any suggestions. I think this could have a better title, but I have no idea what it could be. Maybe one of the other poets could suggest something. :) Forgive any unintended asshole-y-ness. -JRS
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GRiM

16 years 6 months ago

thanks...

Thanks...yeahh i liked this myself...i could think of a title really quickly and yes! u should check out my short story...its really good. if u take ur time to read it...im sure u'd like it!