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Lesson on rhyming and my health

If tone effects rhythm then rhythm will effect the rhyming pattern because in poetry every thing is structured to build up to either and idea a point or an image which ever you want to hammer into your readers head. Now it depends tone
which want to rhyming the
say it wants to have more of a frantic feel then the rhyming be more erratic and short words in order to make it feel sound like all these complex thoughts racing through your head a million miles a minute at the same time . It could get convoluted if your not cautious. So you have long lines of words also probably in between the short lines.

Now my health tomorrow I’ll be going to UVA to talk to a neurosurgeon because Chkd has ran out of ideas of what to do so we’re getting another person to see and find out a solution that is hid behind this enigma of pain.


interesting theory. good luck with your medical and health.

*hugs, Cat

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