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scribbler
Sun, 2013-06-30 12:54
Hi Rula
All the words desert my mind
poetic phrases disappear
it's almost like becoming blind
when the dreaded"block" comes here.........................hope the block is only in the poem....stan
Rula
Tue, 2013-07-02 04:13
hello Stan
and thanks for sharing those verses. Seems you've gone through this crisis before? :)
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Ian.T
Sun, 2013-06-30 19:02
Rula
The frozen words are probably in deep space, they just need you to reach out and become one with them again.
Try Barbara's Eternal renga to kick start your writing.
What sort of help can we be, if you need words I have a few spare lol, as to lines,Washing, Train, and at my age skin lines lol.
Take care young lady the words are being sent by thoughts and that's damn fast, infact instant, Yours Ian.T
PS:- I looked to the East at sunrise and thought how could I be short of something to say in the light of something so beautiful.....
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Rula
Tue, 2013-07-02 04:35
hello Ian
And many thanks for your fast delivery. At least you did your best. Should be my turn now.
As for the beauty of the sunrise, I would say the skyscrapers have blocked it all, but fear not, for I shall reach it one day.
Thank you.
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Ian.T
Tue, 2013-07-02 09:10
Rula
The skyscrapers are of the physical world, now look at the sunrise with your Spirit, it cannot be blocked and nothing can dull its beauty.
There in your self the sunrises can be held.
As with all things, where you need your God he/she will attend to your needs, don't search just look,
Yours Ian.T
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