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The ultimate expression of less is more LMAO!!............scribbler

I really liked the spacing between the dots...gave it a tempo!

Lol!

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

I agree with Hooded Stranger. It's the dots that make it!!

Lol!!

Lots of love Mand xxxxxxxxx

So simple and yet! so effective.

A wonderful economy with words, wouldn't y'all say!?

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

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