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Another Friend Bails Out
HOUR OF SADNESS
At our age
daily one needs to be ready
to go
else hear the sad news
one just goes
where heaven knows
May those who have lived a long life
''REST IN PEACE ''
convey to all
as and when
Somewhere beyond beyond
many hope to meet
God keep Hope alive
in one and all
as and when
'tis time
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
When its time
it is TIME
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2022-12-11 14:26
Death has...
a lesson for us all. No one gets out alive! ~ Geez.
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Lavender
Sun, 2022-12-11 19:31
Another Friend Bales Out
Hi, Lovedly,
Your poem is direct, yet calm. True - when it's time, it is time.
Lav
lovedly
Mon, 2022-12-12 00:04
yes of course
your and Gee's support are my finale in all my poetree thnx
Lav
Geezer
Mon, 2022-12-12 00:51
I regret...
to inform you, that unless there is a double entendre intended, [bale] should be spelled [bail].
Just wanted to let you know. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Mon, 2022-12-12 03:06
Excellent ERROR
Thanks corrected