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ONLY THREE CHOICES...EDIT
Each one of us
in life has three choices
but we all need to exercise one only
Either give in fully
give up totally
finally
fight with all your might
win or fail
let it be immaterial
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2022-10-15 10:07
Some wise words...
from an elder. Hmmm, I would delete the [else, and just make it give in totally] Either give in fully
.give up totally
finally
. fight with all your might
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sat, 2022-10-15 11:50
Thanks GEE
Shall see
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2022-10-15 20:02
Dear Lovedly
I love this. I’m crying a little. This is hard to see from where I am in my life. Between these kids and the dog and all the running around, I’m basically just driving around half numb or completely sobbing. Every day is a fight and today the fight was extra long and fairly brutal. I really needed to read this tonight, at that particular time. It needed to be “immaterial “.
“Poetry is more about learning…” touché.
Spectacular,
Tim
lovedly
Sun, 2022-10-16 13:00
WOW
I didn't expect
to
make you sob
nor other's
love rob
LOL
ha
HA Thanks
wipe your tears
these are true materials
friend
tissue....
Lavender
Mon, 2022-10-17 09:46
Only Three Choices
Hello, Lovely,
Wise words to live by, each and every day.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Mon, 2022-10-17 11:50
Thanks Lav
b glad
b happy
merci